Cause-Effect Essay - Language Proficiency and Success (First Draft)

Language Proficiency and Success

I. Thesis statement: Speaking proficiency will lead people to their success in career, interpersonal relation, and even in their whole life.

II. Career
A. Get job easily
B. Do job well

III. Interpersonal relation
A. Communicate with other people easily
B. Express oneself clearly

IV. Whole life
A. More confidence
B. More ambitions

V. Conclusion: If people have good speaking proficiency, they can success in their career, interpersonal relation, and in their whole life. Consequently, people should try their best to get this language proficiency to get more success in their life.




Recently, a survey shows that language proficiency has important relation to success. For example, good speaking proficiency will lead people to the success in their career, interpersonal relation, and even in their whole life.

First of all, good speaking proficiency will make people success in their career. People will get job easily by their good speaking proficiency. For instance, when a person has an interview with their boss, and if that person can make full use of his/her good speaking proficiency to show why the boss will hire him/her, that one will get job easily. In addition, having good speaking proficiency will lead people to do their job well. If a salesperson has good speaking proficiency, he/she can persuade his/her customers to deal business with him/her easier. Speaking proficiency is so important that it will help people success in their jobs.

Good speaking proficiency will also contribute people to have good interpersonal relation to other people. If a person has good speaking proficiency, he/she will communicate with other people easily because they can promote himself/herself plainly. Additionally, good speaking proficiency can be the reason for expressing people’s ideas clearly. If people can speak well, they will also have good proficiency in the organization, so they can express what they think clearly. Also, they can avoid unnecessary misunderstanding from other people. Therefore, good speaking proficiency can lead people to success in interpersonal relation.

Third, Good speaking proficiency will lead people to make success in their whole life. For example, if a person has good speaking proficiency, they will have more confidence than the person who doesn’t have this proficiency. People who have good speaking proficiency will be braver to express themselves, so they can get more chances to be successful than the people who don’t have this kind of language proficiency. Moreover, a person having good speaking proficiency means he/she really do something successful, and they must have more ambitions to success in other aspects. Since they have more ambitions to success, they will succeed easily. Hence, having good speaking proficiency plays a vital role in success to their whole life.

Having good speaking proficiency is essential in our life in many respects. If people have good speaking proficiency, they can success in their career, interpersonal relation, and in their whole life. Consequently, people should try their best to get this language proficiency to get more success in their life.

Definition Essay - Happiness (Final Draft)

Happiness


I. Thesis statement: Happiness is to enjoy my own life, overcome the difficulties I meet, and have the people I love around me.

II. Enjoy my own life
A. Have a positive attitude to every situation I am in
B. Seize every moment I have

III. Overcome the difficulties
A. Process of overcoming
B. Feeling of achievement

IV. Have the people I love around me
A. Family members
B. Good friends

V. Conclusion: I will always try to pursue happiness by enjoying my own life, overcoming all the difficulties I meet, and having people I love be around me. Then, I will have happiness in my future life.

Happiness is a kind of emotion of enjoyment and satisfaction, and it can be described in many ways. To me, happiness is to enjoy my life, overcome the difficulties I meet, and have the people I love around me.

Enjoying my life is the source of my happiness. There are many ways for me to enjoy my life such as eating a big meal after the final exam, going to the baseball field to watch an exciting game, and the most important of all: having a positive attitude to every situation I am in. In the third year of junior high school, I was very sad because I was afraid that I could not pass the high school entrance exam, and I wanted to give up preparing for that exam. Fortunately, I met a good English teacher, and she told me that if I changed my negative attitude to a positive one, and seized every moment to prepare for that exam, I would pass it. Magically, I really became happier and passed that exam after I did what my English teacher had told me. From that time, I always take positive attitude toward every situation I am in, and seize every moment I have because it really helps me to enjoy my life.

People may meet many difficulties in their whole lives, and overcoming these difficulties may be suffering to some people. On the contrary, overcoming these difficulties is a kind of happiness to me. To tell the truth, the process of overcoming the difficulties is tiring and weary, but I always find some small pleasures in the process. That is, I can learn more experiences and knowledge from overcoming the difficulties. In addition, the feeling of achievement is happiness. Every time when I finally conquer my difficulties, I will have a happy feeling that I can really accomplish something, and I can defeat myself once again. Overcoming the difficulties really brings me happiness because it can teach me a lot of things.

Besides enjoying my life and overcoming difficulties, the greatest happiness to me is having the people I love around me. The year before last year, my mother got severe cancer in her left breast, and she only got fifty percentage of opportunity to live. Luckily, my mother’s operation was successful, and I suddenly realized that every person I love is everything to me, and I will never be happy if any person I love leaves me. Besides, I am happy when I share all my things with the people I love whether these things are good or bad. For example, my good friends and I always have a talk in our free time, and we always have the same feeling about what makes us happy and sad with each other. This kind of consensus gives me a lot of happiness because I can have such like-minded good friends.

There is a saying that if a person chooses to be happy, then the world around him/her will be happy; if a person chooses to be sad, then he/she will be the only one who is sad. Happiness is everywhere, and it depends on everyone’s attitude toward life. Therefore, I will always try to pursue happiness by enjoying my own life, overcoming all the difficulties I meet, and having the people I love be around me. If I can do these well, I will have happiness in my future life.

Definition Essay - Happiness (Second Draft)

Happiness

I. Thesis statement: Happiness is to enjoy my own life, overcome the difficulties I meet, and have the people I love around me.

II. Enjoy my own life
A. Have a positive attitude to every situation I am in
B. Seize every moment I have

III. Overcome the difficulties
A. Process of overcoming
B. Feeling of achievement

IV. Have the people I love around me
A. Family members
B. Good friends

V. Conclusion: I will always keep these three life’s attitudes in my mind: enjoying my own life, overcoming all the difficulties I meet, and having people I love be around me. If I can do this task well, I will have happiness in my future life.


Happiness is a kind of emotion of enjoyment and satisfaction, and it can be described in many ways. To me, happiness is to enjoy my life, overcome the difficulties I meet, and have the people I love around me.

Enjoying my life is the source of my happiness. There are many ways for me to enjoy my life, such as eating a big meal after the final exam, going to the baseball field to watch an exciting game, and the most important: having a positive attitude to every situation I am in. In the third year of junior high school, I was very sad because I was afraid that I could not pass the exam of entering senior high school, and I wanted to give up to prepare for that exam. Fortunately, I met a good English teacher, and she told me that if I changed my negative attitude to a positive one, and seized every moment to prepare for that exam, I would pass it. Magically, I really became happier and passed that exam after I did what my English teacher had said. From that time, I always take positive attitude toward every situation I am in, and seize every moment I have because it really helps me to enjoy my life.

People may meet many difficulties in their whole lives, and overcoming these difficulties may be suffering to some people. On the contrary, overcoming these difficulties is a kind of happiness to me. To tell the truth, the process of overcoming the difficulties is tiring and weary, but I always find some small pleasures in the process. That is, I can learn more experiences and knowledge from overcoming the difficulties. In addition, the feeling of achievement is happiness. Every time when I finally conquer my difficulties, I will have a happy feeling that I can really accomplish something, and I can defeat myself once again. Overcoming the difficulties really brings me happiness because it can teach me a lot of things.

Besides enjoying my life and overcoming difficulties, the greatest happiness to me is having the people I love around me. The year before last year, my mother got severe cancer in her left breast, and she only got fifty percentage of opportunity to live. Luckily, my mother’s operation was successful, and I suddenly realized that every person I love is everything to me, and I will never be happy if any person I love leaves me. Besides, I am happy when I share all my things with the people I love whether these things are good or bad. For example, my good friends and I always have a talk in our free time, and we always have the same feeling about what makes us happy and sad with each other. This kind of consensus gives me a lot of happiness because I can have such liked-minded good friends.

There is a saying that if a person chooses to be happy, then the world around his/her will be happy; if a person chooses to be sad, then he/she will be the only one who is sad. Happiness is everywhere, and it depends on everyone’s life attitude. Therefore, I will always keep these three life’s attitudes in my mind: enjoying my own life, overcoming all the difficulties I meet, and having the people I love be around me. If I can do this task well, I will have happiness in my future life.